Black Poetry : Your Chi Has Got Me Teething!

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  1. Tha-Emissary

    Tha-Emissary Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It was strange, but I felt something today that I’ve never experienced
    Perhaps I felt your chi for the first time
    Something so mysterious and mystic
    That even a China man would say it was good
    And yet it was so good that it ran through me as if I were a metal conduit,
    Embedded in my saliva, so intensely mixing with my own as I swallowed
    It was so good that I awoke last night in the pitch black of darkness
    Sat upright in my bed and began praying like the Buddhist monk
    With legs crossed and eyes closed
    Meditating on this one who could create such an energy flow in me
    And as I meditated I began to think about the touch on my forearm earlier that day
    The very touch that collapsed my veins underneath my skin
    The simple stroke that tamed my inner dragon and cooled me
    Turning my breath of fire into a breath of ice
    And as I entered into deeper thought
    It wasn’t long before I began to dream of what it was like to read her novel
    So soon found myself flipping through these clear thin imaginary pages chapter by chapter
    Chapter I: Her dislikes & likes,
    Chapter II: The times she cried,
    Chapter III: her want and dreams,
    But suddenly I felt so sick that I wanted to stop because it was wrong to delve
    Through one in dreams like this
    Though when I tried to put her novel down
    I found out that I couldn’t let go and it stuck to my hands so
    That I trembled and awakened once again
    Only to find myself this time regressed into the mindset of this small child
    Who was curious, anxious, and badly teething
    Hoping that this new love would just hurry up and come through
    Like my first pair of teeth.
     
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    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Deep read poet
    I really loved the concept
    Mentally this is a crazy thing dam
    The chi got you for real
     
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    This sounds like something I'm experiencing now Tha-Emissary keep up the good work
     
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    skrybble7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Man, the Chi flowed through you and right out your pen.
    This was deep. Flo on poet.
     
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    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    it strange too but i felt the same about you. flow on tha emissary.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    whoa this was awesome and the feelings on high !
     
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    massive....i really love ya flow man.
     
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