Black Poetry : Your Body

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by N2urSoul, May 1, 2001.

  1. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    love, i, my body
    when it is with yours...
    it is so quite
    a new thing ~
    muscles better and
    nerves more...
    i like your body
    i like what it does
    i like its how to's
    i like to feel the
    spine of your body,
    its bones, tones and
    the
    trembling firm~smooth/ness
    which i will again
    and again and again and
    again kiss,
    i like
    kissing this and
    that of you
    i like slowly stroking
    the shocking fuzz of
    your electric furr, and
    what-is-it comes
    over parting flesh...And
    eyes big love-crumbs,
    and possibly i like the
    thrill of under me - you
    so quite new


    (c) 2001 SOULOFASISTA
     
  2. Twofish

    Twofish Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    *applause*

    I do so love the way a poet such as yourself can make love seem so enticing and beautiful...well done!
     
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    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Well then....

    my body's callin' ya name!!! :laugh:

    :heart:
    GQ
     
  4. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    2Fish~

    Glad ya' like the piece...Thanks sista-gurl
    for the read!!
     
  5. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    GQ

    If ya' body's callin' my name, I'm tellin' ya'
    mine is in the midwest....so make that stop over
    on ya' way to Jersey ~Boo!! :lol:


    :heart: ya'!
     
  6. Jyntlbreez

    Jyntlbreez Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    well now...

    ain't nothing wrong with liking what you like!
    ~nice flow~
    Jyntl
     
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    oh sis!

    I'm likin how you be playin with dem wordz!!!!!

    incitin my quiet riot!!!!

    shiznit!

    thank you :)

    A
     
  8. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Jyntl~

    I hear ya...thanks for the comps!
     
  9. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Alyce~

    All I can do is :lol:~~!!

    "incitin your quiet riot"....:lol: :lol:
     
  10. thepoetsean

    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    l o v e l y !!!!!

    wish it was me!

    (can it be?)

    sean.
     
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