Black Poetry : Your Body (Repost)

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  1. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    love, i, my body
    when it is with yours....

    it is so.... quite a new thing ~
    muscles better and
    nerves more

    i like your body -
    i like what it does -
    i like its how to's -
    i like to feel the spine of your body,
    it's bones, tones, and the
    trembling firm smooth/ness
    which i will again
    and again
    and again and again
    kissssssss

    i like ...

    kissing this and that of you ...
    i like slowly stroking the
    shocking fuzz of your electric furr,
    and ...
    what-is-it comes over
    parting flesh... and eyes big
    love-crumbs,
    and possibly ...
    i like the thrill of
    under me -- you

    ... so quite new



    (c) 2001 SOULOFASISTA
     
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    go 'head chile ... sang ta that man !!!

    :)

    N2urSoul ... have I said how happy I am to see you back???

    Much Love
     
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    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Destee

    Hey sista gurl! I'm glad you're glad, but I do have to let you in on a little secret ... (I've never left) ... :lol: I'm always in the room readin' the work of each of the poet's & poetesses, I just haven't written much lately!!

    Glad you enjoyed the repost!!


    :heart: ya' doll!!

    N2
     
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    I think this is a Great poem!
     
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    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is

    beauty, and beauty, and beauty, again!

    more, please :)

    thank you

    a
     
  6. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WindWalker

    I thank you for reading & enjoying this piece! It is one of my favorites!!

    N2
     
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    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you sis!
     
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