Black Poetry : Your Beat is so Neat (Especially if we could meet)

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by howardtsu, Feb 9, 2006.

  1. howardtsu

    howardtsu Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i want to eat

    but how do i compete

    when i can't delete

    the problems that defeat

    my attempts to drive through the sleet

    when the rain started falling, i slid off the street

    and tried really hard to meet

    girls so sweet

    but like my mother you're too neat

    for your own good so now i treat

    myself by visiting neighborhoods like Mister Rogers and Sesame Street

    to find my inner child in hopes to repeat

    with you a game of football, but without using cleats

    i'm baring my soul so you can see my heartbeat

    for yourself



    love,

    howard
     
  2. Prizefighter16

    Prizefighter16 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I like ur style of writing...u got a tyte flow....this poem was fiyah


    Keep the flow going

    Word from MzSoulll aka SCW
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wow howard this was phat i like this joint !!!!
     
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    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow howard im feeling this unique flava you'll bringing flo on poet.
     
  5. twision

    twision Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    U thunk you are gaining fans!!!!
    Well deserved!!!!!!!!!!!!
    Another tyte wryte poet!

    Peace and love
    twision
     
  6. spicybrown

    spicybrown Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow......

    This was spectacular..........I give it :star: :star: :star: :star: . I'l be looking for more of your unchained melodies.
     
  7. Tantrum

    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    That was beautiful
    Im sure your lady
    Is loving that smooth flow poet
     
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    Sweet baby_face Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    AWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!
    :hearts4: :hearts4: :hearts4:
     
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