Black Poetry : your back is up against the wall what you gonna do - song poem 2

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by deepy, Sep 7, 2004.

  1. deepy

    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    I am writing the same flow..cause i don't think
    you know
    you be repeating the same crap how
    bad, hard life is..you don' t
    checkout your history..or think
    before you begin to preach
    desruction or I hate cause
    they did this to me...
    yeah, they did
    So What Now..

    your back is up against the wall
    what you gonna do
    your baack is up against the wall
    what you gonna do
    stand there yelling
    stand there crying
    or keep on comin thru

    your back is up against the wall
    what you gonna say
    your back is up against the wall
    each and every day
    you gonna sit there swearing
    how they do you OR
    focus on some ways.

    stop moaning and groaning
    checking out the booty
    call...stop thinking it's about
    sexin you up cause you definitely
    can fall..
    the higher triangle needs to be
    felt .. the lower tri will then take
    care of itself..
    get pass philosophizing
    and critizing and see the overview
    I tell you one and tell you all
    twill be the death of you..and
    me...
    cause they really dont care no
    more about us..there are
    others here now to take our place
    and they will do it for less than
    a ride on a bus
    ..you hear me..

    our backs are up against the wall
    what you gonna do
    our backs are up against the wall
    what you gonna do
    stand there grinning, screwing and blinging
    leave off reading, loving and thinking
    hey
    your back is up against the wall
    what you gonna do
    your back is up against the wall
    what you gonna do
    stand there primping
    talking religion
    or keep on pushing thru

    your back, my back i mean us all
    instead of talking and showing off
    lets walk the walk and run
    the race to push it down..
    lets find the gate..it ain't to late
    to break the wall..
    so we can....
    can..
    but back is up against the wall
    what you gonna do
    what you gonna do
    gonna do..
    do







    (c)ncn/deepy
     
  2. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i loved this...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    deep flow i hear ya !
    ya pen took off on dis one
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Liked the rhythm and message of this deepy. Complaining alone doesn't change anything. Speak the truth sis.
     
  5. deepy

    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    thanks yawl...the chorus has been echoing in my head for a very long time..and i am still working out the verses...so your response really helps me as i continually work on this little piece..
     
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    Prizefighter16 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was definitely a prize poem
    nice scribin
    im really feelin this one
    and i hear wat your sayin :teach:
    keep the flow goin :cool:
     
  7. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Whoa! This is truly off the hook, girl. You went to the depths here, wow.
     
  8. triniti424

    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sista do you think we would eva be blessed enough to have you share this for us LIVE in chat?? it would be wonderful :) what do you think :) cause this one had me rollin and bobbin my head with it :)
     
  9. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oh i wish you could get in chat so you can flow.... this was off the hook
    flow it sis just flow it...likes ya style!!!!!

    Peace
    Angel
     
  10. deepy

    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    wish i could get into chat also....i like reciting...
    thanks to all for the support....
     
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