Black Poetry : Your Angel

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Poetic Pride, Aug 6, 2004.

  1. Poetic Pride

    Poetic Pride Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hey ya'll I'M BACK, IF YA'LL REMEMBER ME.

    Your Angel

    With wings white, pure, and symbolic of the virgin Mary
    I step in a trance that is contrary to the Holy Days,
    Where raindrops fall on my angel gown
    and Dear Lover is playing in the background:
    Dear Lover I hope this letter finds you...
    that it comes in time to say no salave..."

    Or I stand before you to issue you a special delivery to eliminate misinterpretations and complications of understanding love
    coming from an Angelic being.
    Take my hand and as I speak may you feel the vibrations
    that my energy gives out to you...
    may your dreams be filled with the passion and desire
    that I speak of in my prose.
    Then unexpectantly, when you awake, I am thanked
    as you wipe my feet with your tears
    and
    dry them with your bed clothes.

    "He washes my feet with his tears and dries them with his bed clothes...but I begged him please, sir please...RISE FROM MY SANDALS AND CARESS ME, TAKE ME IN YOUR ARMS AND HOLD ME..YOU'VE DONE ENOUGH PRAISING AND ADORING, BUT RAVISH MY BODY THAT DESCENDED FROM HEAVEN...YOU SAY I AM YOUR ANGEL...
    then take me in your arms in hold me..you've done enough praising and adoring.
    Make me feel that we are one and our souls are in harmony singing subliminal love songs, arising at a new genre.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed the letter will find one in grace and time
    this was so well written and very beautifully pose'd
    flow on continue to leave da mark of pure love of an
    angel one see u as ......love it .
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very well laid enjoyed the read...
     
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    Very Beautiful read Poetic Pride!
    I really enjoyed it!!!!!!!

    Keep it flowing!
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Such a wonderful easy vibe to this loving scribe.
     
  6. Poetic Pride

    Poetic Pride Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thankyou

    tHANKS for the love...it's great to back to Destee...I'll be showing love to all you new poets and to those that's a tad bit older in the game.
     
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