Quiet Poetry Lounge : Your African Queen

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by queentswana, Jan 25, 2004.

  1. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I love you DEVINELY... for loving me,
    Another man could never be.

    You played with my mind, my heart and my soul
    Now I am yours to "HAVE and to "HOLD.

    You made me believe I was second to none
    My thanks to your mother...she gave me her son.

    I'll love you completely the rest of my days,
    cause your love comes in so many ways.

    Since you're a singer, HUM me some lines,
    and send them straight from...

    your "HEART to MINES"

    copyright Tswana T K 2003

    :star: :flamet:
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this so beautiful so sweet and flowed very nice
    keep scribing
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I agree with Rich, such a sweet flow, nicely posed.
     
  4. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    a very wonderful scribe here
    when u find some one
    you love so dear...
    all you can do is love them
    likes the vibes...
    very sweet
    thanks for sharing...
    Angel
     
  5. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hmmm

    allow me this moment
    to play a little tune
    of heartfelt desire
    to make the head swoon
    not lusting for the lovely
    not jonesing for love
    just sitting here waiting
    coz i'm all you've dreamt of
    a lover's soft melody
    with a silky smooth beat
    that's the makeup of my personality
    for that's the whole of me

    a thorough bred southern raised
    with an eye upon the world
    watching all the bruthaz play
    while looking for that special girl
    one whose heart is plain to see
    for he whose eyes are open wide
    to see the aura of her innocence
    in the open field she hides

    waiting.

    for the one who holds the key
    to the chains that bar her way
    forbidding
    laughter
    joy
    and
    happiness
    preventing love from coming her way

    'til he joins her.


    (i'm here.:)

    let the river flow.
     
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