Black Poetry : Your A Poison...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by LovelyGoldenOne, Jun 24, 2003.

  1. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    your a poison to my life
    to my heart
    to my soul
    your a poison
    who's actions will haunt me until i'm am old
    your a poison that has seeped into my skin so you can stay
    your a poison that drenches through my brain everyday
    a poison that has made me paranoid in every thing i do
    one that makes it difficult to trust another when i need to
    your a poison
    to my health
    to my body
    and to my spirit
    you make me physically sick with your interferance
    i would forever rejoice if i never saw you again
    and then you have the AUDACITY to say
    "so are we still friends?"


    oh HELL no....
     
  2. SwtT

    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Lovely.......you must have met the ***** whom I've been writing about!!1 You took everything I was thinking and youwere just...............there!!!! And oh my, Looking at yo writing it and descrbe this..its beautiful!!!!!!! :wave: :heart:

    Tyte *** Flow!!!!!!!!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this was perfected loved this flow
     
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    serenti-poet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ohhhhhh so real and raw wonderfully flowed as always
     
  5. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    awwwwwwwwwwwwww swtT ur so SWEET!!:):):) thanks....u got me cheesin' now....lol

    thanks so much rich, that means alot to me comin' from you...:)

    and serenti ur always a sweetie:) thanks so much:):)
     
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    Don't know what he did
    but it's probably best you
    never see him again.
    strong flow, Lovely
     
  7. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i can't even start to comment on what he did...but he almost ruined my life.....
    i don't wanna EVER see him again....
    thanks skrybe...
     
  8. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    girl... i know exactly what u mean. thats what im sayin, "HELL NO" lol. nice flow tho, dont u just hate it when a person can be poison....
     
  9. Sierra

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    Hey Lovely,

    This is a wonderful piece!! I know how you feel. We all have been down that dark road!!

    I hope you never see him again.

    All my best to you!!

    ~Sierra~:heart:
     
  10. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks so much poetically and sierra!!!!:):)
     
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