Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Da Street So'ja, Sep 3, 2007.
Very few options and a will to survive doesn't always make for the safest decisions. Experience teaches there's more than the streets. Your words teach many.
so much seem cold yet able to river the storm ......
Yes, there's more...there's so much more!! ..and the fact that you penned this, shows that you're now seeing a brighter light...a dawn of a new day. Keep in mind that WE ...just gets better with TIME.
I love how you ruled your TIME ...instead of TIME ruling you.
Big props to you ...That's a true So'ja!!
I've checked this poem out numerous times.. but could not express myself well in appreciating it.. so glad my Sister chimed in with what rang true:
echoing what queentswana said. (thank you!)
you're a true Spiritual Object of Justice and Awareness.. and this poem.. very real, Soldier
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