Black Poetry : YOUNG LADY (Haiku)

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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    With lovers 'twas of old the fashion
    by presents to convey their passion
    no matter what the gift they sent
    lady saw that love was meant.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    do y'all

    know what this lady talking bout!?:confused:
     
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    I have an idea....but not sure...
    still the mystery keeps me
    reading...Keep it coming
     
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    hmmmmmm, the riddle...

    Heres what I read in it.......their love was old fashion, was of the purest sense....they presented that love without inhibitions, and in so doing she realized without question his love for her.

    thats my interpretation....

    Epiphany

    :heart:
     
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    sexe1

    the mystery is ......well i'll leave a clue ?

    she be of beauty in his love forth he be of she..:heart:
     
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    Am I Right?????

    I am thinking that it is a
    mother and the love she
    has for her son.

    :eek:
     
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    Could it be

    He just want a piece.
    The cost means nothing to him.
    She thinks he loves her.









    *My Haiku Answer...Right?*
     
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    Epiphany

    ya on the path but now ya at the cross road
    which way do u go to fine the truth ......hummm!
    i'll leave a clue ..........at the cross road go right!
    and there u will fine what the lady talking bout!:)
     
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    Joyce Joyce Joyce

    ya peekin but not quite.......hummm!!!!
    the clue is ...............lady see of he his love in the beauty of she
    even if the gift is a ......blink blink !!:confused:
     
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    close but...........she be in a compassionate bliss
    of he as his love is comforted in her beauty
    so the gift be of blink blink!!
     
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