Black Poetry : young gifted and dead for 10y/o dami rip

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by negrotic, Jun 13, 2003.

  1. negrotic

    negrotic New Member MEMBER

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    they called him jonny jus come now jonny jus dead
    on a housing estate stairwell is where jonny bled
    killed by a wound man a gash to the leg
    and the worst ting it was done for street cred
    every body jus fled jus lef him for dead
    im ok im ok was the last word he said
    young gifted and black with his whole life ahead
    now jonny just come is young gifted and dead.


    jonny jus come now jonny jus leave
    killed by a disease thats plaguing our streets
    it can take any gunman any dealer or teef
    or someone like jonny just a yout wid a dream
    a nationwide mourns together we cry
    as another young life again is denied
    a parents worst fear cos they can't say goobye
    if there's word on the streets and that word should be why?..

    for dami
    rip
    copyrighted for poetryshackproductions 2003
     
  2. MORE

    MORE Banned MEMBER

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    street done seen more horror
    den me
    midnight skies ring out gun cries...

    this was deep. like it!!!!:toast: :toast: :toast:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    O'my welcome within

    welcome to destee.com
    upon family & friendz
    welcome to the family u kin

    O'my as i welcome thee
    u touched deep within me
    i feel this ever so much
    as i clutch hold to embrace
    i've lost one gentle face
    i really know this flow so well.......a sad lost at the street cost:(

    but welcome right in enjoy and be loved as love given to flow love
    :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave:
     
  4. SwtT

    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow! W elcome to Destees!
    you are a deep write..say to say l......it's a true fact
     
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