Black Poetry : Young Faheem

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  1. AACOOLDRE

    AACOOLDRE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Young Faheem

    I never knew you were so impatient
    Appointment times are meaningless
    Kicking your own passage way out of the womb
    Water gushes from her mound,
    Then comes you

    You advanced yourself
    So I name you Faheem
    3 months ahead of the world
    Supposed to be a powerful scorpion,
    like me

    I tried to catch your eyes
    I turned my back for just one minute
    And behold ! a mechanical stork put you in a cube
    Then flew you away to a better place to rest

    It’s a 50/50 chance of life
    And I hope your heart survives it all
    Because there are many things I must tell you
    And I desire to see my seed grow

    By Andre Austin
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    MAN

    MUCH SAID HERE IN FEW WORDS
    I FEEL YA BIG TIME 50% IS ALL WE
    CAN GO ON ! LIFE BIG GAME .........
    WELL WRITTEN BRUTHA
     
  3. poeticdelight

    poeticdelight Member MEMBER

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    this poem has me in complete..

    amazement for you have captured
    the true meaning of life seen
    through the eyes of a newborn child

    true talent poet


    pd :)
     
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    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Good flow!! I dug!

    Peace
    GQ
     
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