Quiet Poetry Lounge : You'll Know What to do with This...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by watzinaname, May 15, 2004.

  1. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Just gonna wrap it all up
    with a pretty little bow
    in a tiny little box
    so no one will know.
    Gonna close it up
    and seal it with duct tape
    I would seal it with a kiss,
    but my mouth is still agape.
    Gonna bind it with some twine
    make sure nothing slips out
    this is a special delivery
    taking the celestial route.
    I stamped this with my faith
    and paid the postage due
    I can only hope and pray
    this package finds its way to you.
    I hear you have all the wisdom
    and the remedies for such dealings.
    So God, I sent you this tiny box
    containing all my feelings.
    I trust that you will
    handle with care.
    Releasing them in this realm
    didn't get me any where....
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    send it priority mail
    wit care waiting
    tyte drop
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Guess I'd better, Rich, cause it's a jungle down here, thank you for the response.
     
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    Sister...

    this was so masterfully written
    the imagery above all...just pulls
    you right into the preparation
    of the packaging...

    moreover, the meaning...
    was so wonderful...
    for only he, can resolve
    the many cares we place
    within the box...

    Wonderful peace...
     
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    afrostotle Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Inspiring to the fullest!!!!!!!

    Sista...I heard you on this one. more often than not we all should"Give it to God"...One Love
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i am in agreement with afrostotle "GIVE IT TO GOD" indeed...
    nice flow here

    Peace
    Angel
     
  7. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks for letting me know that the imagery drew you in, and the message grabbed you sage, thank you.
    Afrostotle and mzblkangel, yes, some things are just beyond us and we have to just give it to God. Thank you for your support on this piece.
     
  8. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Airmail box..."NO POSTAGE REQUIRED"...it got there before you sent it...ain't GOD good? ...my, what a big smile came over my face when I read this...it really touched my heart...thanks
     
  9. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Glad that it touched you queentswana, yes God is certainly good.
     
  10. jazzymoonchild

    jazzymoonchild Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Indeed where all the blessings flow.....Wonderful piece
    Continued blessings



     
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