Black Poetry : You

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  1. themac46

    themac46 Active Member MEMBER

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    Who are you
    You are like the hands of a clock
    Always moving keeping things
    Away from my face
    You are like my trainer
    Always keeping me in pace

    You are my reason, for being
    You are the beat of my heart
    You are my eyes for the seeing
    You are always with me never apart

    You are the one that keeps me strong
    You are the one that never really lets me go wrong
    There were times when I wanted to give up
    But it was the sweet sound of your voice I heard
    That kept me pumped
    You are always there with encouraging words

    You made a glow many years ago
    When your parents had you
    But even though they are gone
    Your glow still flows on

    I am glad you and I met that hot summer day
    You are the meal that which I do not have to pay
    You were my new beginning
    And you will be with me until the end.
    Who are you then.

    YOU ARE HE, AND HE THAT IS IN ME!!


    :cool: :love:
     
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    Beautiful.....

    He who is always with you
    never letting go
    standing beside you
    in troubles and calm
    lifts you for a purpose
    change your point of view
    He who can move mountains
    never, ever leaves YOU.....

    I see this poem having two
    meanings...
    the faith in God
    that pulls you thru
    and the belief in yourself
    that is limited only by you

    Very inspirational poem Mac
    keep em comin...... :toast:


    Epiphany :heart:
     
  3. themac46

    themac46 Active Member MEMBER

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    Epip

    Thank You for the read. My inspiration to write comes from all around and others but it is because of him I can.
     
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    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Mac

    This was tight dog... very inspirational!

    Madd Respect
    Reas
     
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    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Mac,

    Love the way He and You laid this flo out. Very beautifully done...


    Madd Holiday Greetings :heart:
    CCBSKYN
     
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    as one..

    within yourself and with him....

    I loved the line.."You are the beat of my heart"...meaning he is your life-force, your reason for being?..

    A nice piece...

    K
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    BIG Mac

    sho ya right ! it is he whom keep u uplifted
    inspired and running like wind as u vibe &
    scribe the word.....work dem key den!:)
     
  8. themac46

    themac46 Active Member MEMBER

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    Reason - Rich - Coco - Kitana;

    Thank You all. I have to say that the flo for this was His. I just hit the keys.

    Again thank for the read.
     
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    emax Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Feelin' the flow on this piece. Excellent read.
     
  10. themac46

    themac46 Active Member MEMBER

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    emax

    I am glad that u enjoyed it. Thank you for the engarging word.

    Again thanks for the read