Black Poetry : You...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by IfUComeSoftly, Aug 28, 2006.

  1. IfUComeSoftly

    IfUComeSoftly Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i think of you often
    i cannot help but to wish
    for a day when we can
    be the way it was meant
    to be and unfold
    my words have changed
    since you walked away
    they aren't as lively
    as chipper and keen
    as they once were
    people have started
    to question my words
    they can't see my thoughts
    are of you...
     
  2. phenomenalwoman

    phenomenalwoman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It seems like sometimes the more you think about someone the less they think about you. No matter how much your friends tell you to let it go, you can't until you are ready. Maybe I read in too this a little to much, but it was very real to me. You said alot with a little. Wonderful!!!!!
     
  3. 4EVERLUV

    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey sista softly:
    This is a nice sweet write.
    I like, I like, I like

    Much Luv
     
  4. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    well where are they?

    let them see this
    tell them how you feel

    daydreaming well done here

    peace