Black Poetry : you

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Dlovely, Feb 7, 2006.

  1. Dlovely

    Dlovely Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you are the air when i need to breathe
    my found when I'm lost with no one to lead

    the blood that runs wildly through my veins
    you are the one who always eases my pains

    the reason for my heart to beat strong
    you are my right when everything goes wrong

    the one who catches my tears as they fall
    you are my only hope to reach up to stand tall

    the whisper in the wind that always lingers near
    you are my shelter when I'm trembling with fear

    the light when my whole life is going dark
    you are the footsteps that forever leave a mark

    the before and after you will continue to be
    you are my love and will always be my eternity
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    that great one
    that touch deep
    this was sweet
    and endearing
    unique............
     
  3. ibrahim

    ibrahim Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    That was sweet.
    I love it.
    Flow on.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Oh, for to be someone's everything. Such a lovely piece.
     
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    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ahhh that was sweet flow on dlovely. flo on!!!!!!!!!:hearts1: :heart:
     
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    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    bEAUTIFUL pOET
    Love affects us in defferent ways
    Seems like your love is your all
    Much Love Poet
     
  7. cursed heart

    cursed heart Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Truly beautiful piece!:great: :great: :great: :heart:
     
  8. Prizefighter16

    Prizefighter16 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    loved the scribing...and i liked the repitition....

    blesss

    :cool:

    MzSoulll aka Soulchild Written
     
  9. twision

    twision Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It's good to inspire someone,
    but even better to let someone know they inspire you!
    Great poem
    Very touching!

    peace and love
    twision