Black Poetry : YOU

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by jazzymoonchild, Jun 14, 2004.

  1. jazzymoonchild

    jazzymoonchild Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You inspire me

    make me want to be

    unleashed

    uncomplicated

    unrehearsed

    You,

    touch my intellect

    and tickle my curiousity

    you, the deepest parts

    of you,

    my kindred

    release, the juiciest

    parts of me,

    the Real me

    the WomanChild

    I've been referred to

    You,...inspire me

    yes,

    to dream and think

    and be



    jazzymoonchild, copyright @ May 2004
     
  2. lilcherry76

    lilcherry76 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    just in a moment,
    you explained the unexplainable.
    and unleashed,
    what was already uncontainable.


    hey i'm diggin' this one, flow on.................
     
  3. jazzymoonchild

    jazzymoonchild Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you, LilCherry :party:

    I'll share more in a bit...
     
  4. lilcherry76

    lilcherry76 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    sure thing, i like your style of writing, it's like waves of the ocean, all going in a rhythmic flow like .........................that
     
  5. Beautiful_by_me

    Beautiful_by_me Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :flame: DANG Jazzy, :flame:
    as soon as I catch my breath from one...you take my breath with another....

    Whew!!!
    I think I'll ride this one for awhile...yeah..​
     
  6. jazzymoonchild

    jazzymoonchild Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Girl, I'm trying to be like you! Much, much love~~

    Jazzy :jumping:
     
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    daroc Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    u had me scrollin down like dang thats it- i wanted more
     
  8. jazzymoonchild

    jazzymoonchild Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    LOL!! Thank you,.....maybe I will add to it. :sand:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this was awesome poet of the week wow!!
    had my mental all up in it ....
     
  10. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very nice Poet of the week