Black Poetry : YOU...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Pharaoh Jahil, Oct 4, 2003.

  1. Pharaoh Jahil

    Pharaoh Jahil Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I love being with you
    You make me feel safe and secure
    When Im with you
    I feel like I could talk to you about anything
    You're there for me when times get hard
    You laugh at my jokes when no one else will
    When I am sick, you heal me with your love
    You are more than my woman,
    you're my best friend..
    I can't picture my life with out you
    God has blessed me......
    I have found my soul mate
    You taught me how to think with my heart
    You brought the caring sensitive side out of me
    You showed me that it's okay for a man to be emotional
    Being with you is finding inner peace
    My mind is stimulated and at ease when
    you speak to me.....
    I am in Heaven because I am with you....
     
  2. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Oh wow......
    You're tugging on the heart strings...
    and leaving a sister....
    utterly speechless...
    you are blessed to have found such and
    your contentment shows in your writing
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow dis is good...
     
  4. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wooooweeeeeee!!!!
    dis was str8 awesome
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oh so wonderful
    i feel the ease
    and comfort in your flow
    the deep connection
    of affection, so relaxing
    that Soul Mate Connection
    this is indeed
    a wonderful poetic flow
    Peace
     
  6. triniti424

    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    awwwwwwwwwww suki skuki now...someone done found him some inspiration :) lovely my brotha whoever she was she brought you back you to the scribe...:) lol must be a lovely blessed sista :)