Black Poetry : You.......

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by LibertyLady, Oct 3, 2003.

  1. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    There is sumthing in youre Eyes....
    i cant explain.....
    but does everything have to?
    It makes me quit....
    quit in my whole being..
    just by looking at it..

    I get Lost somewhere...
    because i cant Touch it...
    and i havent Seen it...
    with my own eyes...

    There is sumthing in Youre eyes..
    that gives away a secret..
    that only my Soul preserves...

    My view Returnes to the Bleu Sky..
    for He can only Reveal whats in youre
    eyes..

    There is sumthing in youre Eyes..
    my mind cant Nominate...
    but my Heart Speaks of sumthing..
    familiar...
    and..
    unknown...


    is it YOU....


    Love.......?
     
  2. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice..
    He should tell you if you see it. Cause it must be something. It has his attention cause you know it. This here makes it all so real.
    The " EYE's " don't lie.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this was beautiful eyes speak truth
    wow!!!!!! I really love it
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    the eyes talk when ya dont....
    i love this flow...
    from beginnin ta the end...
    nice flow...girl
     
  5. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lovin' this...
     
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    sweet sweet love...
    i liked this a lot...
    tyte
    peace
    khasm
     
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    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I know what you mean my sista when you feel all out of wack and you searching for the reason why and one look in those eyes...:blush:
    lovely scribe my sista :)
     
  8. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks all.....



    beautifull ones..


    LoveL
     
  9. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i like this alot...
     
  10. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks Lovely One :heart: