Quiet Poetry Lounge : you

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by precisewisdom, Jun 20, 2003.

  1. precisewisdom

    precisewisdom Member MEMBER

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    water melodies play 'gainst my soul
    flowers bloom spring in each petal
    i am the earth from which it grows

    nourish me with water and sunlight
    cultivate my roots till they expand into you

    you...the gardner of my fruits

    dig deep into my earth
    and plant your seeds deep
    for me to multiply it's worth
    complete

    for i only wish
    to re-produce another

    you
     
  2. Sierra

    Sierra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hi, :wave:

    I like this!! Verry well written!! Nice flow!! :toast:

    :thanks:for sharing this one!!

    ~Sierra~ :heart:
     
  3. SwtT

    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Man this was :hot:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    show nuff loved da flava flowin here
    tyte scribe poet !
     
  5. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice flow.
     
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    emprezz Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    quite beautiful to love someone that way! big up b-more (i've been in ATL since October).