Black Poetry : **** You!!!

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Royal_T, May 23, 2003.

  1. Royal_T

    Royal_T Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Would you leave me alone.
    Fool, don't you know I'm grown.
    If I choose to stand here and do "NADA."
    If I choose to scream just because I gotta.
    Today, I decided to talk to my **** self,
    See what's going on in my life that I need to take care of.
    I've been talking to you all this time,
    You obviously don't give a flying f***.
    You don't care if I have a headache or if I choose to have my hair plucked.
    I know, I'm babbling and that's my right.
    I can go on and on if I choose, hell, I just might.
    I wanna curse in every sentence,
    Seems to be the only thing to make you listen.
    LISTEN!! LISTEN!!! LISTEN!!! Could you listen to me sometime today.
    **** YOU! You made me forget what I had to say.

    *i wrote this years ago after figuring out that we women can be a tad bit confusing to others....lol*
     
  2. Lahana Mysteria

    Lahana Mysteria Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Confusing to men in particular...that is the beauty of being a woman.If only some would take the time to know it's not so confusing after all....
     
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    Royal_T Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm glad you understood the underlying message. We are indeed confusing to men (according to them). I think I make sense most of the time, but the men I know are always saying I'm not making sense. What's up with that????
     
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    can't live wit 'em
    can't live without 'em
    just don't make no sense
     
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    We hear you Royal T
    Thru chronic poetry...
    I'll never take for granted
    Real gems you gave to me-

    1poetsought ~
     
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    LMAO! Oh GAWD this was so hilarious. I know this feeling. (Sounds like me on my period replete with cramps and migraines) Sometimes I will curse my behind off, and they cry for no reason. Being a woman is hard........LOL! Thanks for relating sista!
     
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    Royal T, that is so true. Sometimes I get in a mood where I need somebady to scream at, but at those times I think its safer to pick up a pen like you did. :O) True verses...thanks for sharing.
     
  8. Royal_T

    Royal_T Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    1poet...that was sweet...


    Legacy and Solitude....Indeed this is so real. Makes it easier to understand how folks lose their minds...

    Much love to all of you!
     
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    Royal t that was great! Im getting a laugh outta this
     
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    skrybe7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this spoke volumes!
    felt the heat fo' sho'!
    Peace to ya!
     
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