Black Poetry : You....

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  1. serenti-poet

    serenti-poet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Time and time again you call my house, tell me I want you because you sho do want me. You fool me with your pearly whites, and hazel eyes, and break in me with your forever key.
    You kiss me with those cold, cold lips and hold me with your poisoned hands,
    You give me the look as if I’m Queen Stupidest Of the Universe, but I really don’t give a dayum.
    You chastise me day in and day out, but expect me to lie down as you climb on top.
    You don’t know the meaning of NO, and PLEASE DON’T, and STOP.
    You tell me you luv me even if you f**ked that gurl
    And you expect me to feel betta cuz she couldn’t make yo toes curl?
    You reduce me to so many tears till the point that I can’t see,
    You call me stupid nicknames that I hate, but u don’t know cuz you don’t know me.
    You give me the key to yo house but the next day you get a top lock,
    You call me each and every name but expect me to sniff yo dayum socks.
    You handle me with roughness and call me any name but *****,
    And when five 0 came to my house, this “trick” didn’t even snitch.
    And how bout we’ve been dating 4 years and yo moms say you should be with Faleshia,
    But it’s a shame that yo mama don’t know that it was YOU who couldn’t keep HER.
    And NO we can’t be friends, and NO we can’t just chill, why don’t you just run to Dia or Christie eventually I know you will.
    So as I leave you crying tellin me another deceiving story,
    Amazingly I finally realize that you really are sorry. :censored:





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  2. Monetary

    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    WHAT! :eek: NO THE HELL YOU DIDN'T GO BACK....

    This was well scribed. You got me hot when you went back...****, ****....****!. :lol:

    So, many people....men and women...are in this same situation.

    :thanks: for sharing.
     
  3. serenti-poet

    serenti-poet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lol NO NO NO Monetary you got it wrong baby I talkin bout he waz sorry as in T-r-i-f-l-i-n-g lol Serenti don't cross the same river twice even if the river is calm and peaceful at the time ;) surry I wasn't as clear with what I meant :) newayz peace and blessins and keep flowin :):):)
     
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    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    Don't No No No me....

    You were trying to go back. :mad: ooooooooo...Don't try and play me. And, don't make me :spank: you. As soon as you felt he was sorry, you were thinking about going back. :jawdrop: You know you need :help:...you over there :cry:. Here...take this :grouphug:. I hope you feel better.

    :lol: :D

    Much Love... :toast:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    lol..............i feel ya but?
     
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    that was all that gurl! the juice from you vibe was flowing.
     
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    ight ight serenti............tight poem....much love............ :)
     
  8. serenti-poet

    serenti-poet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    okay okay Monetary I promise I didn't wanna go back gurl, not even once, okay maybe ONCE but it was 2 seconds. lol :)

    but what RICH lol

    thanks purple I try my best.

    wassup sarcasm haven't seen your work in a long time I missssss you lol :) thanks for the positive note tho gurl :)

    and to all peace and blessins and always keep flowin. :)
     
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    no doubt serenti.....i was away celebratin my 3yr anni w/my man........imma hit y'all w/somethin new soon...........much love :)
     
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    I really felt you girl, been there.
    You have a gift.
    Enjoyed it.