Black Poetry : You yeah....you

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Kori, Oct 4, 2003.

  1. Kori

    Kori Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I
    sit simply...
    dreaming of
    rminiscing
    wondering
    what its like to be kissing

    you
    yeah...you

    heart beats
    fast
    thump! ThUmP!...
    THUMP!!!
    ****, I must be
    trippin
    slippin
    sippin <-----its wat
    I want to be
    from you
    swept everywhere
    up....
    in....
    down....
    out....
    the whirlpool
    of who?

    you
    yeah...you

    your words
    your thoughts
    your eyes (cuz i love those gemineyez)
    your essence
    your sweet lips
    your presence
    your cute butt
    you intellect
    your intelligence
    your hurt
    your pain
    your loooooooveeeee....
    of all
    of it
    I
    sit simply
    dreaming of
    reminiscing
    wondering
    what it's like to be kissing

    you
    yeah....you

    I'm so in love with you
    yeah...definitely
    ....you
     
  2. SwtT

    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    awwww this is sooo cute!!!
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was a nice flow..
    enjoyed it
     
  4. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    flowin in da name of love
    very sweet scribe..........
     
  5. Royal_T

    Royal_T Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm in love with this. Very nice.
     
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    ahhh yes
    this was very smooth
    wonderful
    Peace
     
  7. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    aaawe, this was so sweet...
    loved the flow...
    such purity and newness
    of love...it was like
    floating down the page...
     
  8. HODEE

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    Very Nice ... Kori

    Nice flow.. keep it flowing. Welcome to Destee.
     
  9. true love

    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very nice...i'm feeling this so much cause i'm feeling this way right now...much love to you
     
  10. Kori

    Kori Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you all very much I appreciate it. Its supposed to be spoken word but Im glad everybody understood it I didn't put it in there cuz i dont go in that forum much but thank you all so much for reading and replying to my work I really appreciate it :kiss: to you all!!!
     
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