Black Poetry : You Won't Cry For Me{the healing chronicles}

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  1. Twofish

    Twofish Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    When I opened my legs for you
    I shut my heart to you...

    Becuz I put you on a pedestal
    far more advanced than circumstance or chance,
    closer to idolatry than one would hope to get...

    My adoration of you went way deeper than
    the intimate pleasures of the flesh ~
    and yet erupted in my soul,
    intense, and pouring out like liquid gold...

    A fascinating state of admiration I was in,
    but all was but erased when I indulged with you in sin...

    And now I'm left to question ~
    what is the lesson?
    Would it have been better to live in a misconception?
    Having never seen the Truth that lies within,
    unless I laid with him...
    but in the same time bear in mind
    that I don't get nearly the same satisfaction
    as when I never knew...

    THE TRUE YOU

    Now I see clearly...
    but it isn't what I wanted to see,
    it isn't what I wanted you to be...

    My Tears Sing, but You Won't Cry For Me...

    s.Z. dIviNe 2004
     
  2. SwtT

    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    [email protected] that was a good peom!!! I'm glad im back or I woulda missed this masterpiece
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    whoaaaaaaaaa!!!
    this a sweet release thumbs up 5 star
    lovin it ........wow
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very nice drop indeed
    loved the flow
    Peace
    Angel
     
  5. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Whoa, you really hit this one, hard with that pen. Spelled it out plain, which would have been better in the end?
     
  6. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    dang..was da sex dat bad?
    juss jokin :lol:
    this was truly on point...
    keep dropin dem sis...:)
    one love
    khasm
     
  7. twision

    twision Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I am feeling this one! It's a shame that all too common emotions aren't commonly expressed this well........ NICELY written



    Peace and love
     
  8. Twofish

    Twofish Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey SwtT - good 2 see ya! Thanks 4 the love!
    $RICH$, MsBlkAngel, Watz - I truly appreciate you feelin me :)
    Khasm - you so silly....really though - I am refferring to how this man began acting TOTALLY DIFFERENT after we shared sacred Unity
    twision - it is a true shame, but it makes us better writers!

    LOVE PEACE JOY PROSPERITY SUCCESS HEALING HEALTH LOVE
     
  9. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    not only do it makes us better writers but what you went through is indeed our teacher for future use. I've...been there...done that
    that was a tight piece...I was digging it and feeling it.
     
  10. Twofish

    Twofish Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Appreciate your wordz oh queen from tha BRICKS!!!

    Love Unity Peace
    2fish
     
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