Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Da Street So'ja, Jul 6, 2001.
Absolutely lovely dog! that's the tightest love joynt I read in a minute! loved the last line...
read it again! ****! Dug it...
thanks for making my friday, dun
sending out love in Detroit, son
the one and only REASON
EMAIL THIS TO MY MOMA DOGG
big up to moms for me, dawg
loving the family bond
This is a poem that I wrote to my first love, high school sweetheart after being out of touch for over 20 years. In all honesty the moment is the moment and it cannot be relived.
One moment in time is all most dare to dream
But I have dared to brake the iron bonds of time, paused my world,
realigned the sun moon and stars
Tempted the beast of impossibilities and embraced the ever elusive prey of opportunity,
and have found myself just where I want to be,
So if you don’t mind I will adjust my F-stop, and freeze the moment that I chased the dream seized the moment and found the beauty of my first love in the refined grace and beauty that is you “WOMAN”
Though our ways may part as the planets return and life goes on,
Know this; You have been and ever shall be loved by someone.
Thank you for the moment times two.
My Personal Soja....
this line is my FAVORITE...
**** Boo!! i loved this whole piece!!
i like you like dis... all romantic!
Every So'ja has his other side...it keeps a brother balanced...well written blakman.
GA_, Shaz, Blakverb
didn't think So'ja had it in him huh
yeah So'ja got love pieces, just don't write love that much no more
for there is a greater cause
but So'ja love women
sex and all that
wine and dine
then i show how a So'ja stands at attention
Separate names with a comma.