Black Poetry : You were my world, my reason for my existence

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  1. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    **** Soja'

    Absolutely lovely dog! that's the tightest love joynt I read in a minute! loved the last line...

    Madd Respect
    Reas
     
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    Had to...

    read it again! ****! Dug it...

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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    REASON

    thanks for making my friday, dun

    sending out love in Detroit, son

    the one and only REASON
     
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    EMAIL THIS TO MY MOMA DOGG:D :D :D
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    big up to moms for me, dawg

    loving the family bond
     
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    This is a poem that I wrote to my first love, high school sweetheart after being out of touch for over 20 years. In all honesty the moment is the moment and it cannot be relived.

    One moment in time is all most dare to dream
    But I have dared to brake the iron bonds of time, paused my world,
    realigned the sun moon and stars
    Tempted the beast of impossibilities and embraced the ever elusive prey of opportunity,
    and have found myself just where I want to be,
    So if you don’t mind I will adjust my F-stop, and freeze the moment that I chased the dream seized the moment and found the beauty of my first love in the refined grace and beauty that is you “WOMAN”
    Though our ways may part as the planets return and life goes on,
    Know this; You have been and ever shall be loved by someone.
    Thank you for the moment times two.
     
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    My Personal Soja....


    this line is my FAVORITE...

    **** Boo!! i loved this whole piece!!

    i like you like dis... all romantic! :)

    AlwaysLove.
    SunShyne~
     
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    Every So'ja has his other side...it keeps a brother balanced...well written blakman.

    one
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    verb
     
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    GA_, Shaz, Blakverb

    didn't think So'ja had it in him huh

    yeah So'ja got love pieces, just don't write love that much no more

    for there is a greater cause

    but So'ja love women
    sex and all that
    wine and dine
    romantic situations
    then i show how a So'ja stands at attention

    peace
     
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