Black Poetry : You Were... ...Good Company

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  1. MapleXtract

    MapleXtract Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You were...
    infatuated-
    in_fact_you_ate_it
    (yep, five syllables,
    just checking)-
    and so was I...
    simply elated, --> :spinn:
    e(x)ube(rated),
    whenever we
    integrated
    or I got...
    ...uh...
    situated,
    you know
    what I'm sayin'?
    And I always hated
    when you left
    'cause when you stayed it
    was like...
    ...mmmmmm...
    pardon me,
    just getting a little
    saturated;
    wet-
    washed
    (anybody got an iron?),
    drenched in
    my own come-...
    ...ly thoughts
    (where was your mind going?).
    And you know what else?
    It just amazed me
    how weak
    you- consistently-
    made me,
    with your hands~
    ome face
    (well... whenever I
    had the pleasure of
    coming in contact
    with it, anyway :wink: ).
    So, and conclusively,
    while sinking
    within the confines
    of my own
    'dampness'
    I am thinking
    that (duh) I
    should have invited
    you over for dinner
    more often.
    You'd have stayed in...
    ...good company.
     
  2. LISTERSCRIBIN'

    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oh, yeah...let me be the first to say, dear friend, that this piece is truly tyght. keep on scribin', i'm watchin' you, gurl.
     
  3. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Oh My Dayuuum!!!!

    Maple,

    This piece has connotations of :flame: "coming" all out of every mental orifice of mine...

    Hella :hot: visual to stim' the 'magination Queen!!!

    Can ya tell I dug your dampened flow?

    :kiss:
    GQ
     
  4. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    to my Maple Syrup

    mmmmmmm

    why is it so hot in here



    oh lovedided the piece
    to

    dssNY
     
  5. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wow! mapleX

    ya bringing a heatwave coz dis be hot as hell sis..:hot: :hot:
    now i know why thangz be so warm got me sweatin'

    hey do stop by my house and hit my guessbook sis:D
     
  6. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    MapleX

    Work dem words out sistah....! :lol:
    This is extra hot :hot:


    N2
     
  7. Danilyn

    Danilyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Maple...

    You are just oozing with sweetness on this one~
    Little sweat beads are forming at my browline...:lol:
     
  8. Watcher

    Watcher Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Well you now have my attention!!!!! Xtremely so......mmmm...Got me working on a plan to put your talent to Xtreme USE:wink:
     
  9. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ohhhhh shhh.......

    :jawdrop: in- fact- you- ate- it

    you saturated the whole forum with this piece!!!!

    whoa,
    jh.
     
  10. Reason

    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sweet Sticky~ lol

    Can a brutha get X-tracted?!? Maply of course...lol

    What's for dinner?

    You know it was all Flame dont you ma...

    Madd Love
    Reas
     
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