Black Poetry : you wanna know me?

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by HODEE, Nov 27, 2008.

  1. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I am learning to be more ​
    flexible

    Like I was before
    I had to capture my time like I did
    To recover to be ready to give more
    I gave you all my time and love
    I found myself falling short
    Because you forgot to return my love
    That can only come from your heart.

     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    see right here these words run deep i love how u structed this joint
     
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    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    THANKS BROTHER $$RICH$$

    Yea.. u give all your time. Finding your taken for granted.

    your lead and style inspires talent. it's still true brother.

    keep inspiring the family. let me know before the Destee poetry book starts. hit me up.

    HAPPY THANKSGIVING!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    sure thing we just been talking bout that i will not leave you out .....still in the makings
    once we connect with the right group of minds ....likewise bruh ! enjoy
     
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    Hodee, this was great....I really know how you feel here. Sometimes, I really enjoy short flows like this, cas they pack a mean punch.

    nicely worded.:spinstar:

     
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    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank You
    sweet apple*pie

    I have been reading some of your drops. I like it!:spinstar:

    1 ------ > -----> -----> --> I on U
     
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    you will find that special lady who won't take you for granted.as for the lady in question, what goes around comes around :)
     
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    no poet

    you were being cut short

    getting the short end

    how many ways can i say it
     
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    TO MY NEW FRIEND
    THIS WAS A NICE PIECE. IM FIGHTING THE URGE TO FLOWBACK TO YOU. I DONT WANT TO TAKE AWAY FROM THE MESSAGE YOU BRING... I LIKE...:jump:
     
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