Black Poetry : you use to care

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  1. Dupe

    Dupe Active Member MEMBER

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    I pick up the phone
    and on the other end is a clear tone
    i wish that tone spoke your words
    but thoughts of the sort sound absord
    you use to call and say sweet things
    how much joy you would bring
    you use to tell me u love me for no reason
    but now only on special seasons
    you use to hold me
    now your arms are unfolded and you let me free
    i would never worry if i fall
    because your love would catch me after all
    lately you walk by me and don't even speak
    your words became discreet
    i feel more like an illusion to you
    you were the one who help me get through
    my bad times
    i'd get all giggly when you come around
    but then you started turning your smile into a frown
    you wanted something different it seemed
    i am at the state of confusion i want to really talk to you
    but do you want to listen?
    it's you i've been missin
    and we haven't even been apart for long
    i don't worry if you love me or not because i know you do
    i just feel so hurt by the things you do
    leaving me out in a box where i can't get through to you
    i understand you would like to handle it own your own
    but would you treat the situation like this if you were grown
    how do you feel?
    will i ever know?
     
  2. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very nice
    much love and respect on this
    let it flow
    nice indeed
    Peace
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    likes ya write flow on.....:angel1:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    tyte scribe poet very nice drop
     
  5. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow...sister you pull the heartstrings on this one
    truly felt...
     
  6. BaduX

    BaduX Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :luvv: :luvv: :luvv: :luvv:
    i luv this one... i can really
    relate to this poem!!!
    GOD BLESS :wave:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I could feel this...emotions were flowing.
     
  8. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow!

    I am really feelin this....I have lived this. Your flow is beautiful and I am lovin it.
     
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