Black Poetry : You Touched Me

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  1. aqueenpassing

    aqueenpassing Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I am a product of Child abuse and unfortunately it still exist today. A child
    should never have to suffer this pain.... I have many poems on abuse coming from the streets of Los Angeles and a ghetto life with a dysfuntional family, I thank God that I have survied and try to reach back to help others through everyday life and my poetry not trying to offend anyone just speaking the truth as I see it and as I have lived it..... God Bless.


    You Touched Me


    “Hey sweet baby”
    I saw you looking at that
    pretty dress, those shoes and
    glittered hair net too!

    I can get them for you cuz you
    a pretty little thang.

    “Hey you touched my private parts”,
    “Shhh don’t say a word”, don’t
    even call my name.

    Pretty little thang, I’m gonna do it
    again, now you do the same.

    “Here you go sweetie”, here’s a doll for ya to,
    now remember what I said, you know what to do.
    If you tell anybody I’ll hurt you really bad and
    yo mama to.

    “Pretty little thang”!!

    Originally wrote in 1967 Copyright by Yvonne Coleman-Burney (Queen) 2002
     
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    sadly shame
    sweet little thang!
    how a man can
    do such a thang
    mess up da brain
    still da joy
    try to get strong
    after doing sweetie wrong
    after years gone by
    who had da rites to a vergin

    it's a crazy world how so many children being touched
    misused
    abused
    accused
    da tears rolling like a river

    sadly sad piece yet GOD see fit so my dear Queen speaketh it !!!

    i hate a busta like dat i can cross his head wit 42 wacks
    **** i wanna beat him down
    no rites
    no heart
    a **** soul
     
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    Bishop Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    so sad and yet true
    many young children
    terrified by those that
    should be able to trust
    An uncle
    cousin
    brother
    father
    family friend
    makes the child feel dirty
    like they done something wrong
    not many go one to live normal lives
    but with the help of God they can rise over any situation

    Thanks for this.
     
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    aqueenpassing Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    "A BIg Hug"

    Thanks Guys,
    I appreciate the sentiment, It use to be really hard years ago to talk about let alone face. But like you said Bishop you can rise above, you can do all things with God who strenghtens you...

    Peace to you both
    Queen
     
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