Black Poetry : you took my breath away...

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  1. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    there was music in the background
    to drown the sound
    the rum and coke didn't dull my senses
    it freed my inhibitions

    incense candles
    provided mood enhancement
    and angie stone
    spoke to me
    'til
    sensual thoughts
    of loving you
    told me what i should do

    swept away by the lyrical sway
    of man and woman
    in the throes of ecstacy
    i came to you

    baby please

    as rum gave way to tropico
    and gerald relieved angie
    my fantasies
    turned to a romantic sway

    {you took my breath away}

    "hello" i said
    to the image of your smile
    resting awhile
    within the sweat and heat infested fog
    i live in

    "come to me" you reply
    as i'm filled to overflowing
    with the fragrance of your scent
    enchanted by your...
    "i want so very much
    to feel the magic of your kiss"
    your smile has me caught up
    in the rapture of evening's bliss
    i....................wished
    to have access to the curves of you
    as honeydew free flows
    abundantly
    i've come to see
    if only in my mind
    the fine lines
    that defind who you are

    as the evening moonlight fades
    i listen to the mellow waves
    of soothing songs
    telling the story of you
    wrapped up in your pre-dawn hue
    as passion's dew
    free flows
    abundantly

    i can feel your warm, sweet breath
    on my skin
    ...your soft, gentle hands
    pulling me in
    as our mental
    cross roads ran
    {'xperi}mental fueled passion
    lasting
    into the midday hour

    {twilight last gleamed sometime ago}

    "check it
    you've got your wallstreet bruthaz
    blue collar bruthaz
    down-for-whatever-chilling-on-the-corner bruthaz...."

    angie was knocking again
    as her bruthaz became men
    in this mixed up world i live in

    y'all come again, now

    ...hear?
     
  2. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I feel a song comin' on..... :)
    Nice scribe baller!!

    :D

    N2
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Baller ya on da money wit dis tune .......making love waves
     
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    Baller

    I know you probably
    get tired of reading this,
    but..... I enjoyed your poetry. :)
    Scribe On Poet!


    Poetically Turn'd Out!
    CCBSKYN :heart:
     
  5. Euphoria

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    Great Poem

    Baller, I loved the images and the flow. I could feel everything u were saying. Great piece.
    *Emma*
     
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    Baller...

    As always your poetry touches so deeply
    superb poetry...thanx 4 sharing.


    Epiphany :heart:
     
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    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    in...out...in...out...

    BREAthe.:)

    thanks y'all
     
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