Poetry Critiques : YOU TOLD ME

I definately enjoyed this too. The message is clear. And you grabbed me when you started out by saying, you told me.

Like you told me and this is why I feel the way I feel. Like it makes since. Stanzas are cool too, like Rich said.

i feel this for realz. I feel weird critiquing other peoples work because i'm still learning the art of writing, however there is a flow to your writing that I like reading and its good to see ya post. I haven't seen ya posts for a while. So its good to read.

Lovely

Desert Storm
 

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