- Mar 31, 2001
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I definately enjoyed this too. The message is clear. And you grabbed me when you started out by saying, you told me.
Like you told me and this is why I feel the way I feel. Like it makes since. Stanzas are cool too, like Rich said.
i feel this for realz. I feel weird critiquing other peoples work because i'm still learning the art of writing, however there is a flow to your writing that I like reading and its good to see ya post. I haven't seen ya posts for a while. So its good to read.
Lovely
Desert Storm
Like you told me and this is why I feel the way I feel. Like it makes since. Stanzas are cool too, like Rich said.
i feel this for realz. I feel weird critiquing other peoples work because i'm still learning the art of writing, however there is a flow to your writing that I like reading and its good to see ya post. I haven't seen ya posts for a while. So its good to read.
Lovely
Desert Storm