Poetry Critiques : YOU TOLD ME

PLATINUMILLITY1

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you told me that you loved me
and put no 1 above me
you told me that you need me
and no 1 else could be me
you told me that you wanna keep me
and no 1 else could see me
you told me all these lies 4 all these years
and now im saying goodbye fa real
you told me how i was the best
and i was you down chick nothin less
you told me the other broads coudn't compare
and i was the one with that special flare
you told me that you loved me
and put no 1 above me
you told me that you need me
and no 1 else could be me
you told me you wanna keep me
and no ther girls could even see me
so i guess you lied about sayin you'd never leave me
but i just cant believe i put up wit the ish you told me
:hearts2:
 

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