Black Poetry : You Take Me There

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by soblessed, Dec 28, 2005.

  1. soblessed

    soblessed Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Captivated by your love
    Enticed by your voice
    My body yearned for your touch

    My emotions in a frenzy
    I never imagined it would be like this
    The anticipation, finally comes to an end

    As you wrapped your arms me
    To give me a hug
    Excitement runs through me

    You gently stroke my face
    Pulling me in by my ponytail
    Tenderly kissing the nape of my neck

    About to explode with desire
    You handle me with care
    Grazing my skin delicately

    Sending chills down my spine
    Butterflies in my stomach
    My pulse races

    Wanting you to take me
    Somewhere I have never been before
    The thrill is like no other

    As you look in my eyes
    I get lost into you
    I need you more

    Our bodies entwined
    I feel you enter my warmth
    The longing has stopped

    The enjoyment, no words can describe
    You unknown to my treasure
    I bite my lip

    Trying to hold back from screaming
    I feel you deep inside
    Making me weak to our love

    My mind rushing
    Heart beating faster
    I moan louder

    The pleasure overwhelming
    Caught up in the motion of your body
    Inside I'm dancing

    Can't take no more
    Won't stop quivering
    My juices eject

    You hold me tightly, kiss my forehead
    We truly became lovers
    I close my eyes

    I open my eyes
    I am filled with disappointment
    For it was only another dream......

     
  2. Tantrum

    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Dreams can be forfilled
    Lips caress your body
    Im soblessed to be here
    Waited for the moment to be here
    Juices eject in mouth
    Pushing my head down
    Tongue comes out
    You just came twice
    Trying to push my head away
    Squeezing your thighs
    Cause its so sensitive
    Im holding on still licking
    You sensitive
    You scream it feels so good
    You love it feels so good
    I open my eyes
    And im soblesssed this is a dream
    Cause you make me fen
     
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    Ecstasy is a dream fulfilled.

    I love your work, truly.
     
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    LURK Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thats some sensual,exotic issssshh right here.....

    nice piece...sexy stuff sexy stuff....ur poetry just turned me on...
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    we could make that reality if you know what i mean...lol...joookes jokesssss
     
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    Sultry, sensual, and genuinely emoted. So disappointing when these feelings are only in our dreams. Well written piece.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sultry, sensual, and genuinely emoted. So disappointing when these feelings are only in our dreams. Well written piece.
     
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    Wonderful......

    I heard that Soblessed....I think you "took us all there" for a minute.:spinstar:
    Great Job!!!
     
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    sonnee01 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    What Cha Say......

    Gurl you put it down...yeah you did!!!
     
  9. soblessed

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    Thank you Tantrum
    Thank you 1poetsought Ecstasy is a dream fulfilled. But sometimes things are better left as fantasy
    Thank you Lurk
    Watz thanks and yes it can be very disappointing
    Thank you spicybrown and sonnee01, I tried to take you all there
     
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