Black Poetry : You shoulda know.....

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    If i give you me...would it always
    just be me and you
    just us two...
    candle light nights
    walks by the beach...
    just you and me..
    i feel like you ummmmm
    hmmm saving that thought :)
    come....
    drink from my cup of love
    but its not french vanilla
    sweet hazelnut with a touch
    of a unique personal spice
    to raise your temp....
    a taste one of a kind

    didn’t you know
    I have always been real
    When it comes to you
    Aint playin no game
    Just loving you plain and simple….
    As you touch my heart
    You make me sing
    Moving me through the garden of love…
    You should know betta….

    What you think or thought
    Baby you should know dayum well
    I would never leave you
    Came to far to play games…
    I am your angel for ever more
    Through the storm
    Any weather I will ride and die
    With you….

    He was fine sweet and meek
    Feeding my soul
    My support
    My lover
    Of caramel complexion
    My king
    My everything
    Tall and strong and he was mine
    All mine….
    A enlightiment of the best kind..
    And I am his
    But he seem to not don’t understand
    letting that green monster kill
    And cause me pain..


    He should of know better
    in my heart he will always be my
    caramel lover.....
    but you doubt my love

    2004
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very nicely pose'd here
    letting it flow
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sounds like it's from the heart, deep flow.
     
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    THIS IS DEEP MBA!!!!
    IT IS FROM THE HEART!!!
    WELL DONE!!!!



















    :spin: ​
     
  5. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you all for the love on dis...
    just be a blkangel thang :D
    Peace
    Yall
    Angel
     
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    re: hi

    good-afternoon mzblkangel ,


    just decided to hit the board and check out a few poems...


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    well sister, i guess this brother is indeed a KING, as he seems to still have a piece of your heart... -smile- do let him read over this poetic piece, as so much LOVE went into writing it...


    have a nice day...


    sincerely,
    c.t.adams-///
     
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    hmmmm...CARAMEL LOVER huh?....sounds like someone i know...could it be...*dramatic drumroll*....CARAMEL PYTHON..LOL...I knew yall had somefin going on...the PM's in chat, the flirtatous glances at each other across the room..lol...forreal let me stop starting rumors, i enjoyed this poem angel...keep up the good work....
    :heart:
    -story
     
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    This drop had me lost in the moment feeling the emotion and thoughts
    :wink: :read:
     
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    thanks for the love.....Peace
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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