Black Poetry : You Should See Me

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by TotalView, Oct 7, 2003.

  1. TotalView

    TotalView Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I find my courage in your gaze.
    Squeeze my cinnamon glazed
    hands inside your palm
    and walk them down to the spot
    where my twists and your locks kiss.
    Let jasmine and sandlewood storms
    brew just beneath our left breast.

    My voice is strong but sweet
    bouncing in its African rhythm.
    My breath whispers the flavor
    of early spring.

    We are:
    hand in hand
    chest to breast
    flesh to flesh
    struggle to struggle
    mind to mind

    "Open your eyes, Precious!"

    Open your eyes.

    (c) 2003
     
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    URGelus Active Member MEMBER

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    :hot: :hot: :hot: This was mad hott!! I loved it!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    ya pen pose a perfect glide
    dis was tyte and smooth
    keep flowin'
     
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    like the flow
     
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    :wave: Haaaaaaaaaay TotalView :wave:

    ~ Welcome ~ Welcome ~ Welcome ~

    you certainly gave us an up front and total view of peace

    thank you for this Sister and Welcome!

    :heart:

    Destee
     
  6. TotalView

    TotalView Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey All! Thanks for reading and commentings. I really appreciate it. And Destee, thanks for the warm welcome. You've made a very comfortable home here.
     
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    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very tight much love and welcome
     
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    this was sweet!:)
     
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