Black Poetry : You should know

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by shaz, Apr 23, 2001.

  1. shaz

    shaz Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    If only you knew what I know
    I know that you have a heart of gold and a soul to match
    I know that you are a beautiful woman with a mind to match
    I know that you are admired and appreciated
    And I know that you don’t know what I know.
     
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    MapleXtract Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Heartfelt Words...

    ...such as those- in this piece- could, definitely, spoil a woman. Very thorough, poet. *Undoubtedly intrigued*
     
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    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yes

    beautiful, poet. thank you.

    a
     
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    Twofish Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    but........

    how do you know I don't know?
    that I can't feel the intensity grow
    that the look in your eyes doesn't show
    don't let my silence mislead, even though
    I appear to not know, I feel your soul.........
    :)
     
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    Amun-Ra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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  6. shaz

    shaz Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I was just getting started in this forum and I overlooked expressing my appreciation for your responses on this verse
    I really appreaciate you feeling me on this one.
    Thank you
    Much luv
     
  7. shaneak

    shaneak Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice!!!

    But you may be surprised at what she knows...
    But that...
    She just didn't decide to show...

    I like it!!! keep scribing!!!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    YET U KNOW THAT I KNOW
    LOVE IS BEAUTY IN WORDS
    OF DA HEART THAT KNOWS ME
    AND NOW I SEE U IN MOTION
    U KNOW THAT I KNOW THAT U KNOW
    AS I FEEL THE REAL DEAL
    ALL THE THRILLS AND YA CHILLS
    I KNOW AS U KNOW! 4 SHO.......
     
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