Black Poetry : You should be here

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by DaFlavaFul, Feb 9, 2003.

  1. DaFlavaFul

    DaFlavaFul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You should be here with me
    so i wouldnt have to write these **** words
    you should be here holding me listening to my thoughts
    instead of me trying to find the words to express how i feel
    cause i know you understand me , the gibberish i speak.

    You should be here to release my passionate nature
    and calm my anxious soul
    instead im here trying to fosillized with this tech age pen
    feelings only you can behold.
    only u can console.

    You should be here so i can see your smile
    to bask awhile in your beautiful nature
    so i can be all mushy and tell you how much i love you
    and that mean the world to me
    and to watch watch me with that sexy secret smile
    and say' baby your the only one for me'

    You should be here
    but your not
    what am i gonna do?
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    fear not of lonelyness
    one's love is with u within
    ya heart .....think as u close ya eyez
    a smile will come upon you

    nice vibe poet!
     
  3. renae

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    well whereva he at..go find u some1 else..
    don't let anyone have that kind of power
    ur heart can wilt and bloom again
    only it won't die, give it time.. ur heart is a flower

    feelin' u
     
  4. DaFlavaFul

    DaFlavaFul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanx for the kind words,ppl. I guess yall know how I feel.
    as for Kemet-i am female. if thats what u wanted to know.
     
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    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Flava,

    "Jerzee" got skillz!!!

    :heart:
    GQ
     
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    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i,m feeling you sista ........
    defenately.......................
    i,m in tha same situation..............
    and its pure agony......never feld this ....before
    and i dont know what to do.........................to
     
  7. DaFlavaFul

    DaFlavaFul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lol thanx GQ.Liberty, girl this is one feeling i dont ever want to feel again, but what can u do? Love is a strange Thang!
     
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