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Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by IfUComeSoftly, Jun 14, 2006.

  1. IfUComeSoftly

    IfUComeSoftly Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You said...
    There's something in you I see
    There's something that sings to my spirit
    (I think it is in the key of A Major)
    Your words your voice
    There's a connection there
    An aura that is soothing to the soul

    YOu said...
    You are beautiful
    You give me hope
    (And I shall give you more if you allow it)
    Your spirit is very attractive
    Resonates with me on a deeper level

    You said...
    If I could tell you anything
    It would be, "I'm in awe of you"
    (What you are to me isn't describable)
    I'm willing to answer anthing
    I'm an open book--only for you

    I said...
    Well I didn't really say anthing
    I didn't get the opportuntity
    To convey my true thoughts
    Because...

    You didn't come by today
    Today felt like an eternity
    Eternity of silence
    Silence that's defeaning to the heart

    I missed you today
    Today I wanted to hear you
    You say my name, maybe even whisper
    Whisper sweet nothing to me

    I could have said a lot
    If I was given the opportunity
     
  2. abstract219

    abstract219 ...standing on the shoulders of giants MEMBER

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    first i wanna say...great write, poet.....you are truly gifted...

    For Only You....

    you've helped me to unwind
    to unbind the troubled mind..

    in my rush to suceed
    you remind me of my greed...

    in the state im in....
    you've helped me blend...

    colors of rainbow hue
    i see stars and im reminded of you...

    im not all that...i dont try to be
    im trying to deal justly and walk quietly

    sometimes im lost in transition
    change is now, so i change position

    but you are never lost, you are always there
    if you give me time, i have much to share

    let me work thru this, in my uncommon way
    and I will guarantee you brighter days...

    this could be the begining of beautiful days
    for both of us to smile in carefree ways...

    bear with me, my words are true...
    for I see so much in you....

    I cant believe Im still writing this
    see, you inspire me...not one rhyme I've missed..
    lol

    please, understand...
    this is the ramblings
    of a common man.....
     
  3. IfUComeSoftly

    IfUComeSoftly Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    please understand
    this is just the ramblings
    of a comman woman
    i only wnat you know
    the distance you'll come
    will be half the distance i'll go
    more than i can articulate
    you're my catalyst for change
    i dare to evenn speculate
    what this will turn out to be
    all i know is that right now
    i am here for you and you for me
    so please understand
    that those were the ramblings
    of an UNCOMMON man

    i appreciate the love poet... you are sooo good for my ego... lol
     
  4. Unforgettable

    Unforgettable Member MEMBER

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    i agree with abstract ur prominent poet. enough said :)

    i said, u said, but dont actions speak louder then words
    u COULD HAVE said alot but DIDNT now im sittin here given u da birds
    baby plz excuse me for sounden a lil hostile
    but GOT **** ive been waiting to hear ur true voice for awhile
    its a little late and now im sad and bitter
    love dont live here no more my shine is gone and so is my glitter
    ur words sound so sincere maybe too good to be true
    but im smarter then this so lemme give u sumthing thats long overdue
    its called a piece of mind...a piece of MY MIND
    ive given u plenty of chances but life doesnt come wit a button called rewind
    ur an open book to only me and at one time i wanted to explore every chapter
    but now u got me wantin to fly into ur every words and tear'em up as if i was a raptor
    but its up to u to change the way of my thinking isnt there this thing called a second chance?
    cause truth is im weak for u and those words are a little late but they got me in this trance
    spit some more truth when the time is right dont be late and my heart u can borrow
    u missed me yesterday, u missed me today BUT DONT MISS ME TOMORROW

    imma beginner:D
     
  5. IfUComeSoftly

    IfUComeSoftly Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    a beginner you say?... lol... *smh*

    i llke that... 'don't miss me tomorrow'... i love htat actually... thanks for the love sis...
     
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    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    OK, Let me just go down the line.

    Softly:
    My sista, my sista, you said it all when you said this, were you asking for alot? Please forgive me but I am so feeln' this joint. This is awesome

    You didn't come by today
    Today felt liek an eternity
    Eternity of silence
    Silence that's defeaning to the heart

    I missed you today
    Today I wanted to hear you
    You say my name, maybe even whisper
    Whisper sweet nothing to me

    I could have said a lot
    If I was given the opportunity


    Abstract:
    Your reply was all that. Go get her brotha.

    Unforgettable:
    I'm with Softly on all counts:)

    u missed me yesterday, u missed me today BUT DONT MISS ME TOMORROW
    I know that feeln' of getting miss.

    Much Luv to all of you
     
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