Black Poetry : You Said,"I Miss You"(this is 4 u)

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  1. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I lay awake and replay
    in my head the words
    you spoke to me the other day.

    "I miss you" Is what you said.

    I interpreted,

    I= You, the entire you,
    mind, body & soul.

    Miss=My kiss, scent, touch &
    laugh.

    You= Me, the entire me,
    mind, body & soul.

    Then I,

    part my lips and
    sincerely say,

    "I miss you too."

    MadLove:heart: 2 u

    Coco

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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    MISSING SOMEONE SO DEAR AND CLOSE
    MAKES THE DAY SEEM LONG BUT TO HOLD
    THEM IN HEART AND MIND MAKES THE DAY
    SHORT & SWEET ..........TELL ONE WHOM U
    MISSED YA LOVE 'EM ..............NICELY DONE COCO.:D
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    Coco

    how could i possibly be mad at ya

    feel the love girl


    <DSS>
     
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    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    CoCo....


    ...& you say what i scribe is sweet! :)

    this was very very nice... i loved the flow of it!

    OneLuv.
    SunShyne~
     
  5. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $$RICH$$, Thank you for always giving me kind words.

    So'ja, thanks for feeling the love.

    GA, I'm glad you enjoyed the flow. Thanks.

    MadLove:heart: Coco
     
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    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Well look here queen this was nice. I dig the way you set the piece up. hit a brother with some more.

    blak
     
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