Black Poetry : You said come to you...

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  1. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You said you needed me to come to you.
    I didn't know exactly what you could mean.
    I tried not to read to much into it.
    But my mind had created a scene.
    Me flying in impetuously to comfort and hold
    you close.
    You said come to you , you needed...
    I needed it most!

    You said you needed me to come to you.
    From nowhere, your words were brief and concise.
    Ended with a wink and a nod of the head...
    I pictured us embracing, I pictured us in bed.
    I try to shake off the feeling.
    Be sensible, don't call the airline.
    Am I out of my mind.
    The thought of rushing to you...
    Like Kevin and Whitney in Bodyguard...
    I want to "Run to you".

    You said you needed me to come to you.
    Those words caught me hard in my heart.
    What am I doing packing my bags...
    Do I know what this is from the start?
    I know nothing but the words that you spoke,
    that your heart reached out and my resolve
    broke.
    And I hasten to analyze this dillema.
    I don't want the juices to simmer.
    You asked , I answered...
    What more can I do?
    But come unquestioning, directly , openly
    affectionately to you!

    BJS (C)2003
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    whoaaaaaaaaaaa!!
    pack take flyte
    to da love of delight
    hurry !
    if it was me i be hurry hurry !!

    i was all into dis took my mind somewhere ya know
    flow on !
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ok now i am feeling you on dis...
    but i ummm would be going
     
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    Randee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WOW :hot: :hot: :hot: :hammer: . . .
    this is amazing
    go and find out or you are going to hate yourself
     
  5. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Whimsical mental wandering/wondering!

    Don't know what to do...
    I can't read you
    I just feel you...
    You said you needed me to come to you!
    What the hell was a girl supposed to do?
    Second guess and miss out on you?
    Say I will have regrets if I don't find out...
    I already do!
    Just a woman on the verge you see...
    Of giving up my second or third virginity!
    Tasting the sweetness of your request!
    What do I do when I been put to the test.
    I got my bag, my key and the rest...
    Off I go, so wish me the best!
    BJS
    *Thanks for reading and responding...Don't know about this one???? :confused: :confused: :confused: :confused: :confused: :hammer:
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wishin ya good luck...
    place a smile on your face..
    and pray that its alright....
    but i have a feelin it will be...Angel
     
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    ah yes
    flow with it
    very nice
    Peace
     
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    wow...
    you make me remember when...
    love the flow...
     
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    come to me....

    Goto our king ldy, I liked this drop, yu know hw to handel your business
     
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    easier said than done

    you know how to read him
    you know him like your favorite book
    sad to turn the last page and see the end,
    upset that you already know how it will end
    while you are struggling theough the beginning again
    its why you aren't together now
    he hasn't changed
    my wise grandmother always said
    same snake, different skin
    what about all those times
    it was you who wanted him near
    to calm all of your fears
    did he drop everything for you
    don't put up with this fickelness
    tell him friends forever
    but whatever else this was
    is through
     
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