Black Poetry : You Remind Me of...Me

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  1. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You remind me of....me
    You remind me of the special
    qualities, that I tend to forget
    and the golden blessings etched
    in the cornerstone that have been set
    You remind me of...me
    You remind me of why I am
    who I am, and where ever I am, you are,
    reminding me of the wonders of the moon, when
    that unreachable star appears to be too far
    You remind me of...me
    You remind me of emerald liquid currents
    cascading down, this sparkling waterfall
    spiraling down my mind, coursing through my
    veins, seeping out of my pores, essentially ... all
    my essences are erupting and pouring forth
    creating an ocean deep enough for you
    to immerse yourself in, so please, do
    as I blissfully submerge myself in your sea
    reminding me of God's infinite capacity
    to beckon two souls to find the love in thee
    allowing you and I to flow into we
    You remind me of...me
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    when one see self in the inner circle of another
    it always a reminder of self
    i really like how this was poured to canvas with a divine
    gentle upspring tyte drop sista watz
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Two pairs of eyes seeing one vision. Your kind response was very appreciated brotha Rich thank you.
     
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    peace,

    Tyte indeed sista..............

    your deep intraspection
    shows a deep connection
    I feel u remind u of u
    cause UR God's refelction

    peace
     
  5. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    That sort of response humbles me info-moetry, your words are certainly appreciated, thank you poet.
     
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    That was beautiful.
     
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    tzevi1278 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you remind me of pure poetry, cause that is what this is, simply beautiful

    Lyr1c
     
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    Poetic Justice Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It felt like serenity!

    You are so gifted, i really enjoy your imagination.
     
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    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    lovely..
    a really beauty..
     
  10. kente417mojo

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    Watz, that was very cool girl. I loved this poem. I need someone that reminds me of me, so I see what you're saying. Great poem.
     
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