Black Poetry : You Remember Me, Remember We Are FOREVER CONNECTED

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  1. rasheed

    rasheed Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It's forever
    Our relationship has no specific place or time
    i mean it's ageless/timeless
    Before, during and after time
    And i'm driven to confess
    This limited language that we possess
    Can never fully express
    Anything close to
    Our unlimited success
    Nor anything near
    What we caress
    You know me
    Yes i'm still that one
    You first knew
    In the garden now called Eden
    When we were the only two
    Love's expressions
    Were first performed by me and you
    And we're still perfecting them
    Ad infinitum colossus
    Even tho'
    In their essence they are us
    Take my hand
    Look into my deep dark eyes
    Remember that enchanting land
    Remember and
    Let's go again
    To our shared place
    Out beyond infinity
    Into our reserved space
    Remember the origin of divinity
    Remember me always
    We are destined lovers
    We are love itself
    There is only love above us
    Love is that which surrounds us
    Inside and out
    And all about us
    Near and far
    You remember me
    And we
    We are
    We are
    The reason feeling exists, ears hear and eyes see
    We.......(lengthy discerning pause)
    We are
    FOREVER CONNECTED
     
  2. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was very touching and heartwarming...I felt all of this...keep up the good work, as you always do. thanks for sharing this with us.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    a very well deeply felt scribe here wit heart
    lovin ya flow brutha
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This piece captures the essence of a permanent connection. Well done, poet.
     
  5. triniti424

    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :grouphug::grouphug::grouphug::grouphug:
    Brotha i am hoping that you never need this board because YOUR voice is needed here :grouphug:
    :bowdown::bowdown: :bowdown::bowdown:
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    whoa:jawdrop: this was soo deep poet....flow on!!!
     
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