Black Poetry : You Out Of Me ....

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Ms_MochaB, Apr 4, 2002.

  1. Ms_MochaB

    Ms_MochaB Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I ACHE ...
    THE INSIDE OF ME IS WARRING WITH EVERY PART OF
    YOU IN ME

    I CRY ...
    HOPING THAT EACH TEAR WILL REPRESENT ME RELEASING
    YOU OUT OF ME

    I'M IN A DAZE ...
    STARING OUT AND DOING ALL I CAN TO GET
    YOU OUT OF MY MIND

    I WALK ALONE ...
    PRAYING THAT YOU DON'T COME ALONG SO THAT I CAN LEARN
    YOU ARE NOT WHAT I NEED

    I PUSH ... I RUN ... I SKIP ... I HOLLER ....

    ANYTHING I CAN DO TO RELEASE THE

    "YOU" THAT WAS IN "ME" ... OUT OF ME
     
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    lpoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was a good read

    lovin this line here
    "I CRY ...
    HOPING THAT EACH TEAR WILL REPRESENT ME RELEASING
    YOU OUT OF ME"

    oh yeah and on a side note i noticed your in indiana i'm down in muncie going to Ball State
    How bout them hoosiers
     
  3. Ms_MochaB

    Ms_MochaB Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WOW, WE'RE NEIGHBORS

    THANKS FOR THE REPLY ... KOKOMO HERE

    THE HOOSIERS ... I'M PROUD OF THEM, BUT IT COULD HAVE BEEN THERE'S ... TOO MANY MISTAKES IN THE BEGINNING, BUT I'LL TELL THE WORLD ABOUT'EM ... LOL:kiss:
     
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    brotherman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    exocise...

    ...him girl!! Exorcise him out, no doubt.