Black Poetry : "You"nemic

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by blakverb, Jul 12, 2001.

  1. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Silver streams of mercurial bliss
    ride through my veins as I in
    ject you....
    through my cortex
    in the context of love's
    vision after dark
    you glow and I chase
    you you are my beacon
    to days I thought about
    when I was alone
    ....absent of a dream fulfilled

    I can feel you
    digging deep into my blood cells
    via an osculatory osmosis
    that rendered me to
    you and I become "younemic"
    when you leave my
    physical proximity

    and shake in privacy
    until my mind greets your picture
    splashing it's feet in an
    oasis that wears our
    name.....

    we
    ride
    the ripple that
    gleams from the
    striking of the moon
    full blown
    on the edge of an
    orange sky

    waiting for change.

    (c)2001 blakverb
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    WOW!! VERB

    YA LIGHT'IN DES PLACE UP!
    BLAST OF LOVE FO SHO
    MAN DO YA DO YA HEARD ME.......10+
     
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    Amun-Ra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Another Way of Seeing

    In the veins where love flows most deeply--a self injection of the essence of another--well done--Amun-Ra
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    once again

    a VERB masterpiece

    man i loved the flow

    and i not just commenting cause you my man either

    i really feel this
     
  6. GYPSYMAN

    GYPSYMAN Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    BLAK

    THIS IS 'OTHER LEVEL' TYGHT...KEEP EM COMIN BRUTUH BLAK.

    ONE
    G-MAN