Black Poetry : you need to know

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by true love, Sep 28, 2003.

  1. true love

    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    first of all know
    that i love you so
    and i won't let go
    i want this love to grow
    but you have got to stop
    blaming everything on everyone else
    not once have you blamed yourself
    for the predicament you're in
    you accuse your friend
    because it was his car
    but noone told you to drive it
    at least not that far
    you blame others for not busting their butts
    to get you out so you're stuck
    i know it hurts to be locked up
    but don't take it out on me
    when i leave work early
    just to come see you
    there's a lesson here to be learned that's true
    and you won't get out until that lesson has reached you
    but you're too busy blaming
    and complaining
    so from now on
    i won't accept your calls on the phone
    until you do some serious soul mending
    go all the way back to the begining
    and find out what YOU did wrong
    stop singing the same old pity party song
    cause i'm not singing with you
    undestand though, we're not threw
    you just need time to get straight
    and please do before it's too late
    i just thought this was something you needed to understand
    ...but you'll always be my man
    :heart:
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    girl...i like this
    so true about many
    need to get str8
    tight flow....
    hope he dont wait to late...
     
  3. true love

    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you mzblkangel...thank you for feeling my flow.
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    There is merit in your tough love, rewarded by such charm.
     
  5. true love

    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you 1 poet...i'm very glad you feel that way...i know this isn't my best work...but it's straight from my heart and it's exactly how i feel right now.
     
  6. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    most welcome...
    sometimes we have to be like that
    its ashame..to do it...
    but we have to stand our ground...
    much love girl
     
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    This represents a lot of growth and strength, true. I'm lovin this. Big, big ups to ya for your 'tude, not to mention your scribe.
     
  8. true love

    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you so much gempis...i appreciate that so many were feeling this. thanks so much.
     
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    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    He will have to wait to see his true love.

    Can't always be pulled from the game you play. Cause you didn't walk a certain way.

    " stop singing the same old pity party song "

    " you blame others for not busting their butts to get you out so you're stuck i know it hurts to be locked up "


    No Bail...
     
  10. true love

    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks Hodee...so true...he will have to wait until he gains understanding....I hope it's soon though.
     
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