Poetry Critiques : You, My Friend

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Dlovely, Dec 21, 2005.

  1. Dlovely

    Dlovely Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You don't always show it,
    but I know that you care.

    You My friend
    If I'd ever need you,
    I know you'd be there.

    You I'm glad you're my friend.
    Your smile makes me smile.
    Your pain makes me hurt.

    You My friend
    I want you to know:
    If you need me--I'm there.
    make you happy,
    make you laugh.

    You My friend
    Sometimes you make me mad,
    but I can't stay mad.

    You My friend
    Sometimes I want to get away from you.
    And sometimes there's nothing I want more than:
    to talk to you,
    to tell you about my day,
    to hear about yours,
    to laugh with you,
    to tease you,
    to share an inside joke,
    that no one else would get,
    to argue with you,
    but know we're just kidding..

    You My friend
    Do you remember the time when...?
    There are so many times.

    You My friend
    Don't ever lose the wonderful person you are.
    Stay happy.
    Stay healthy.
    Stay you.

    You My friend
    I'll never stop being your friend.
    Don't ever stop being mine.

    You My friend
    Just wanted to tell you:
    I care.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    a very nice poetic spray of a true friend
    great poem
     
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    Dlovely Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thks $$RICH$$
     
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    this is some kind of friend enjoyed the flow, flo poet.:star: :nuts:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    most welcome keep doing what u do Dlovely
     
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