Black Poetry : You Move Me

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  1. MusiQal-Notes

    MusiQal-Notes New Member MEMBER

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    You Move Me

    Hello all. This is my first post. I have enjoyed post from all of the poets here and I think that you all have a true talent. After peeking in for all of 2 weeks I have decided to share a poem of mine that I wrote a few days ago. I hope you enjoy mine.. as I have yours:

    *You move me

    A feeling that flows
    like a river unending.

    Starting where there
    is no beginning,
    ending at the far side of infinity.

    A seed at first
    blossoms into love at last.

    Watering your body
    with beads of my sweat.

    Fertilizing our love with
    a newly found passion.

    We are growing.

    *You move me

    My mind is feeling you.

    The thought of you
    makes my head sway,
    makes my stomach flutter,
    makes my feet tingle.

    Giving me good vibes
    with every touch... every glance.

    Carefully massaging my heart
    with expertly diologed whispers.

    I am yours with my very being,

    I am thankful with my all...

    For I have encountered
    my truest wish.

    I find shelter from life's storms
    in your arms.

    A perfect warmth unexpressable by words...

    *You move me
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    welcome welcome welcome!!!!!!!!!!!

    dear poet welcome within da playgroundz
    of destee's place as u move me in da poetic
    vibe u scribe , lovin ya flow hit dis family wit mo..!
    welcome welcome welcome!!!!:D :heart: :toast:
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    com' in relax and enjoy wit family & friendz
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    as i fly high above spreading family love...........
     
  3. poeticdelight

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    Musiq Soulchild to the infinite power!!!

    WELCOME WELCOME WELCOME :)

    :wave:

    this poem was so tender, eloquent
    practically put me into a trance upon
    reading

    thanks 4 sharing....


    pd
     
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    Destee destee.com STAFF

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    Welcome ~ Welcome ~ Welcome

    :wave: :wave: :wave:

    Welcome ~ Welcome ~ Welcome

    such a sweet spirit you bring with you
    so glad you decided to join in ... thank you :)

    I see $$RICH$$ has invited you to da party ...
    so I'll simply 2nd that emotion ... please make yourself at home.

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  5. epiphany

    epiphany Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Musiqal..

    Very nicely written, welcome to Destees...
    thanks for sharing..:wave:

    Epiphany :heart:
     
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