Black Poetry : You might get.......

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by I-khan, Jan 22, 2006.

  1. I-khan

    I-khan Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you might get
    pushed
    shoved
    spit on
    if you dont stand up

    you might get
    paid,
    laid,
    made into a star
    if you work hard

    you might get
    robbed
    killed
    kidnapped
    if you dont watch your back

    you might get
    mailed to
    jail
    without the possibility of
    bail or
    parole
    if you do the wrong work and get caught

    Those villagers might seem
    odd
    weird
    or stupid
    if you believe in the Western Form of education

    Those villagers might seem
    funny
    crummy
    or like dummies
    if you think Western school really makes you smarter

    My words might seem
    harsh
    cruel
    dedicated to fools.
    Well,they are.
    Welcome to the capitalist world *******.:peace:
     
  2. cursed heart

    cursed heart Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Real tight and real and straight to the point!
    Loved this!:sand:
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this was on point u too it there
    nice drop
     
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    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you get me on the edge everytime i read from you. cant wait to read more of you boo!!!!!!!! flow on poet.:kiss1:
     
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    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    That was hot
    Man I am liking thi vibe
    Meaning in every line poet
     
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    Sweet baby_face Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I love yr work.
    PREACH!!!
    CHURCH!!!
     
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    im feeling this
     
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    ASHANTA Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    teach my brother teach.
     
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