Black Poetry : You & Me (Inspired by "If I could explain our love..." by DIIMOND)

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  1. DigginThaShyne

    DigginThaShyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    If I could explain our love...
    it wouldn't be love, it'd transcend,
    moving across mountains, plateaus, rivers, oceans
    withstanding each bend,
    refusing to break,
    causing me to continuously count the ways you make
    me
    whole

    If I could explain our love...
    I’d simply say
    you + me = an internal burning
    a yearning, eternally binding us
    to points in the other’s soul

    If I could explain our love,
    I’d see all the little things
    meshed
    with the big things
    combined to form
    a non-perfect but still perfectly fulfilling
    soulmate type of thing

    If I could explain our love...
    would I have to?
    would I want to?
    you love me
    and I love you
    that’s all the explanation we need
     
  2. DIIMOND

    DIIMOND Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    What a captivating expression of love!!!!!
    very sincere and breathtaking.... I had to read it 3 times before I replied.... Thank you for being inspired by my flow..
    You know it's amazing to be able to express and let your heart
    expose all the beautiful things that love holds...
    God Bless you Tarheel.....
    Holla Back Fam!!!!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wow!!! now dis be str8 off da hook .....lovin da flow
     
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    DIIMOND Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Indeed $RICH$... Tarheel knocked my off my feet...
    once again...well said poet Tarheel
     
  5. alyce

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    you speak

    directly to the heart of me. And my mind/body/soul.... agree.

    thank you for this

    alyce
     
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