Quiet Poetry Lounge : you make my soul genetic

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by GeneticSoul, Apr 16, 2004.

  1. GeneticSoul

    GeneticSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is my last breath to you
    because you make my soul genetic
    is it like a scientific fact that you do
    or do i just like you for you

    they say you want someone like your father
    but if thats so then i must hate you in someways too
    i really dont think i want someone flips every chance they get
    someon too overbarring and restraining
    leaving a burning sensation in my heart every time i think of him...
    no that couldnt be what i want could it

    you make my soul genetic?
    to the point of bloody tears from being so far away from you
    i just yearn to be near you
    and not to have to fear your words of power and wisdom
    i just want to your little girl creating a fairytale with in my mind
    but once im close i try everything and anything to push you away

    you make my soul genetic
    every time i look in my mirror
    i see you
    i am that image of you
    my smile, my shine is you
    you and my mother
    because you both made me

    you make my soul genetic!
    you are just like my father in more ways then one
    but i can see that its me and you
    and your his future son-
    in-law they say its wrong to love like that
    to be hurt and abused and tossed around and called fat
    but you'd never say that or do those thing to me
    cuz you saw how it hurt and i you brought me to see

    you make soul genetic
    more then you could possibly
    no, see you arent like my father
    and the only things you had in common
    were havin me in your life and being libra

    i made me genetic soul
    because through you my soul was genetic
    that made my love for him kenetic
    and we attracted quicker then ever
    because you made it better

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    genetic soul
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    i really love how this flowed out
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Drawn deeper than deep for some unexplained reason, keep flowing.
     
  4. Dior Robynsonne

    Dior Robynsonne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm loving this and I may become your brand new fan!
     
  5. GeneticSoul

    GeneticSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    much love

    thanks you guys its so wonderful to know that im felt.
    :D
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yes indeed every word as it leak to page
    sweet release of warmth scribe on
    much love at ya
     
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    GeneticSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you my brotha

    :grouphug: i could just hug you right now lol thank you
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    love the way u flow
    this posed nice my sista
    flow on
    tight drop
     
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